Unveiling my Script Frenzy Project

Prior to this year, I had never heard of Script Frenzy. I found out about it on Twitter and was immediately intrigued. I came up with a story idea almost immediately and signed up for the challenge of writing a 100-page screenplay in 30 Days.
I had a busy month but I still managed to finish it up a few days early. I then put it away for a little while and distanced myself from the story. Normally I take more than a week away before unveiling a work to anyone but I didn’t want to keep any of you waiting. 
I have been tweeting about my progress this entire time and I thank you for all the support you have shown me. This is the first draft of my screenplay and as such, I would appreciate any constructive feedback you may have on it. Don’t worry about offending me. Any comment you make can only help me improve the story. And if I make it big one day, I’ll make sure to mention you when I win an Oscar.
So without further ado, here is my screenplay.
David Watts is a twenty-five year old salesman working at a department store. He doesn’t like the cheesy love songs they play over the store-wide speaker system. David just can’t believe that love like that really exists. That is, until he meets a college student by the name of Autumn at a blood donor clinic one day.
Click here to read the entire screenplay and please come back to leave me a comment once you have read it.