5 Comments on 3 TAKES

  1. Wow, great poetry! I really enjoyed these posts… you’re talented, keep writing! 🙂

  2. Those are beautiful poems Chase. You should be a writer – oh wait, you are. S

  3. Thanks for the positive feedback!

  4. Your final poem reminds me so much of Donne's Good -morrow — slightly different spin, but…

    And now good morrow to our waking souls

    That watch not one another out of fear,

    For fear all love of other sights controls,

    And makes one little room an everywhere… (or at least, that's how I remember it)

    Your "nothing out of bounds" to me seems very much like Donne's "an everywhere."

    Ty for the post.

    RM

  5. Hi RM,

    That's the nicest thing someone has ever said about my poems. Thanks a lot!

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